Monday, October 4, 2010

1/2 way critique




12 comments:

  1. I like the third one, and the last one the best.
    Some of them i think that the background is a little bit too busy. I think that some more contrast would be kinda cool in the last one too..

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  2. i like your self portraits and the guitar picture the best. i love the angle of the guitar picture. i also really like the lighting in all of your photos.

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  3. The angle and focus on the hands in the third picture is interesting and creates a expressive piece without needing facial expressions.
    The fairy one below it is cute, but the background is a little bit distracting.

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  4. I love the composition in the 3rd image. I think that some of your photos need more contrast because they seem to be a little too dark. I also like the angle on the last image.

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  5. i like the last one that you focused on his left hand and the other hand is blur. the depth of field is very very nice.

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  6. I love the fifth image - I wish there were more lights to really pop all of the details. The last image is very emotional - you can tell he's really into his music.

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  7. I love the fourth one. You really get a sense of the personality. Light-hearted, and childlike :) The one of the hands is my favorite. All the jewelry adds so much to it..maybe add a little more contrast? Nice job!

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  8. the third one has a natural, real feeling and points to the fact that we express so much with our hands. your frontal self portrait expresses a sense of self-consciousness that feels real. the final image has a intimate crop that bring us close to the subject. i wish there was a bit more light on your face in the self portrait and light on your subject in the last image.

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  9. My favorite is of the hands, although it needs a bit more contrast, and the fourth one with the sitting fairy. I love that one alot as it captures a unique beauty. I do wish the photos in general had more contrast as they are all grayed.

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  10. 1. I like how hazy this shot is up close…making a statement about smoking perhaps?

    2. I love how candid this shot is…the framing is great here…I'd try making her off-center, but it's still a solid shot

    3. Awesome awesome

    4. I wish the face was a little sharper, but overall, I love this

    5. More contrast?

    6. You heard how I feel about candid college shots…after my own heart

    7. I feel like the grain in this shot makes it timeless…this could have been taken at Woodstock

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  11. The best one is the 5th photo fairy and Omm. Love it!! Th light frame and the composition all amazing. Chose that for sure.And also the 3rd one is good, where we can see just your hands.

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  12. I really like the hands picture!
    Also the one where there is just the back, not a face. It's interesting how we gather clues about a person without seeing their face.

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